Friday, December 14, 2012

Chapter two

   chapter two
    new Samus




     Leria opened her eyes, feeling no blood on her hands and cold hands on her arms, and she felt a stinging pain on her chest. "Ooh, you're awake." A nice voice said. The soft and smooth voice echoed through her head, and she struggled to keep her eyes open. She saw all blurry. "You're amazing. You survived the attack. Leria got herself to speak. "What attack?" She forgotten the day before, it was like a blur to her. "Oh dear, you forgot it all." The woman with the cold hands said. Leria struggled to see better, and it all became clearer. She remembered yesterday. What she didn't understand was why she had a stinging pain on her chest. She torched it, and winced in pain. "Oh! Don't touch that!" The woman warned. She was dressed in white, and her face was tan, and she had dark brown hair and hazel eyes. She had a small hat on her head, but Leria made out something saying Metroid nurse. "Who are you? Where am I?!" Leria said worriedly. "Why does my chest hurt?!" The "nurse" laughed. You are at the Metroid infirmary, I am Miss. Reachel, a nurse. Your chest hurts because-" She began. "Did I shoot myself with the lazor gun after I shot Bayles? I should have known not to shoot it after I shot if before..." Miss. Reachel looked worried. "Exactly that, but we didn't know you killed that young boy! Why would you kill an innocent soul like him?!" The nurse rampaged. "I did it for his own good! He was near dead and in horrible pain from the space pirates, and I shot him because he needed it!" Leria cried. The nurse gave Leria a cold glare. "Fine. Your going off into camp." Leria stared at the nurse. "Camp? What do you mean?" "Metroid camp. It will teach you to become a young Metroid. I think that you will become a find one indeed." Leria's eye where wide. "I want to go home! Why cant I just live like a normal kid?! I'm only ten!" The nurse gave her a sweet look. "You need to go there. You have a high potential." Leria rolled her eyes, and she slumped in her hospital bed. "Just get out. I don't need you in here." The nurse looked at her, shrugged and picked up her fancy laptop and strolled away. "You will be starting camp today." She said as she walked out the door.

    Leria wriggled, as she was fitting herself into the camp suit. It was blue, skin tight and plain annoying. So she just slipped on her T-shirt and jeans. I mean, who would care how I dress? she thought. She put her hair into a tight ponytail, and she slipped out the door. "Why in the world are you dressed like that Miss. Seridy?" A coach bellowed. "Because I feel like it." Leria snapped. The coach's jaw dropped, and he stared in disgust at her. "Change now!" Now Leria was getting annoyed. "I will stay this way!" "You are so ignorant! Get into your zero suit now!" Leria murmured something under her breath, and she stepped into the changing room. She looked around for a new style instead of the one in front of her. She went into another locker, and saw the prettiest suit. It was nearly the same, but it was black with bright orange stripes along the sides and on the back instead of a pink odd symbol there was an orange Freesia flower on the back of the suit. Freesia flowers mean spirited, and that was fairly good for Leria! She slipped the suit on and walked out. She got disapproving looks from coaches, but they didn't say a word. She stepped onto a weird platform, and was to put her hand on a little table in front of them. She saw worried faces all around her. What's happening?! She thought worriedly. She felt a painful stab in her hand, and it all went numb. To her utter surprise, other kids where bawling their eyes out. Then she smelt chemicals, and she felt a different jab. Somewhere in her head, or her heart, something was happening. Then she felt her skin ripple with a weird feeling and her blood changing. What the heck?! She thought, before she felt something else. A tingly feeling, like spiders crawling everywhere on her. He saw the bawling people begin to literally try to move, but they couldn't. She felt different.. then everything  around her began to spin, and the jab in her hand loosened, and she managed to see a clear needle with  a yellow liquid in it, and blood on the top. She looked at her hand and it was only a bit bloody, but there was a yellow liquid over it, turning the blood a redder color, and it began to look creepy. Then she noticed what just happened inside her. That needle was jabbed into her hand, and it injected a chemical medicine into her body, which explained the smell. The tingling and shaky odd feeling was her blood getting mixed with the medicine type stuff, and it was turning different. It coursed to her, and it made her stronger, and not human. She looked at her hand again. It had a small blue-white fire crest on the spot where the needle jabbed. She focused on it, and she felt her skin tingle and change. Before she knew it, she was surrounded by metal, and she had a hard glass plate in front of her face with all this confusing stuff over it. A harsh and familiar voice overcame her head, coming from the suit. "Now someone here is a fast leaner! You already have your suit on. You are now a Metroid."



Yay! Finally done! I worked hard on it! We are getting to training camp, which means I am accepting characters! If you want a character in comment below, the more you view and comment the more cooler and important your character gets! But if you don't comment at all, they will probably fade away and die or get kicked out. You can do as many characters as you wish!



                             ^-^ thanks! Signing off!


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Hey there fellow Metroids! General here! Since I am the Metroid ruler, and I am one of the best Metroids, I hope when you comment you will follow these rules!


1.) No swearing or cussing, we have some young recruits here!
2.) Please, don't be openly hating unless it is towards Space Pirates and other story related subjects.
3.) Do not ever press the big red button! If you press the button, our whole Metroid Database and training facilities EXPLODE O.O
4.) Never mess with Leria and Samus's feelings. Those girls are extra sensitive!

So.. follow these simple rules and I guarantee a long long life; for if you don't I will send random troops of Space Pirates to your direction and they will blow up your comment with laser beams. And after that, they will hack into your bank account and take all your money and stuff and eat it.. because they eat everything. They once ate one of my friend's ships. He was mad!



Thanks!

~funplay1/TuckerG